Much better now you have changed the image as suggested. One thing you still need to change is the article position, it cannot come down that low on the page as this breaks conventions slightly - the text needs to come up about 1cm.
Overall, you practical work demonstrates excellence in the following areas: * Producing material appropriate to target audience * Showing understanding of conventions of page design and layout * Showing awareness of the needs for a variety of fonts and text sizes * Accurately using language and register * Using ICT (Photoshop and InDesign) appropriate to task * Appropriately integrating illustration and text * Shooting a variety of material appropriate to task set * Manipulating photographs as appropriate to the context for presentation, including cropping and resizing
Much better now you have changed the image as suggested. One thing you still need to change is the article position, it cannot come down that low on the page as this breaks conventions slightly - the text needs to come up about 1cm.
ReplyDeleteOverall, you practical work demonstrates excellence in the following areas:
ReplyDelete* Producing material appropriate to target audience
* Showing understanding of conventions of page design and layout
* Showing awareness of the needs for a variety of fonts and text sizes
* Accurately using language and register
* Using ICT (Photoshop and InDesign) appropriate to task
* Appropriately integrating illustration and text
* Shooting a variety of material appropriate to task set
* Manipulating photographs as appropriate to the context for presentation, including cropping and resizing